Kia Ora Bloggers!
Here is a slideshow talking about describing a bird using adjectives verbs and adverbs.
I was learning to describe my bird using unique verbs and amazing matching adjectives also by using a great list of adverbs to match the verbs and describe it.
Here is the slideshow:
Kia ora Yasmin, thank you for sharing your descriptive writing on your slide. I enjoyed reading the adjectives, verbs and adverbs you added to page 2 of your slide. I think that active is a great word to describe birds. The sentences are alot more interesting to read now that you have added detail. I especially liked your sentence describing the bird having yellow eyes to watch the glowing sun. I painted an image in my mind. Well done. Your last sentence which starts 'Carefully, the active little soft bird... has more than one idea and is quite long. Do you think you could make it into two sentences?
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Miss Burt!
DeleteThank you so much for your nice comment!
I think you are right I should shorten the word I will go and do that as fast as I can.
Blog you later
Yasmin