I was learning about haiku Poem.It was so fun! About the screen castfy I will be doing that on the next blog post coming up today too! Here is the slide:
Ahiahi marie yasmin, thank you for sharing your haiku on your blog. well done for getting the number of syllables in each line correct. I'm pretty sure I know which form of eruption it is. Do you think that you could use a different word other than ash in the last line as you have already used it in the 2nd line? I look forward to seeing how you will make the first page of your slide more interesting too.
Kia ora Miss Burt! Thank you so much for your kind comment! Yes I will diffnetly improve myself on this Kind of poem and be very proud in my poems.Thank you so much for letting me know my mistakes I hope you will have a nice day.
Ahiahi marie yasmin, thank you for sharing your haiku on your blog. well done for getting the number of syllables in each line correct. I'm pretty sure I know which form of eruption it is. Do you think that you could use a different word other than ash in the last line as you have already used it in the 2nd line?
ReplyDeleteI look forward to seeing how you will make the first page of your slide more interesting too.
Kia ora Miss Burt!
DeleteThank you so much for your kind comment!
Yes I will diffnetly improve myself on this Kind of poem and be very proud in my poems.Thank you so much for letting me know my mistakes I hope you will have a nice day.
Blog you later
Yasmin