Hi Yasmin, you have certainly thought carefully about the words you have chosen. The sentences are really interesting to read and it sounds like you have had fun writing them. Slippery steep sided volcano....did you know that when you use words starting with the same letter it is called alliteration? Here is an example you might enjoy: Even elephants enjoy eating eggs every day. Great writing!
Morena Yasmin, thank you for sharing your writing about volcanoes on your blog. You have used some great adjectives and verbs to describe what is happening in the pictures. As Deb said, you have used some great alliteration. Are you enjoying learning about volcanoes?
Hi Yasmin, you have certainly thought carefully about the words you have chosen. The sentences are really interesting to read and it sounds like you have had fun writing them. Slippery steep sided volcano....did you know that when you use words starting with the same letter it is called alliteration?
ReplyDeleteHere is an example you might enjoy: Even elephants enjoy eating eggs every day.
Great writing!
Morena Yasmin, thank you for sharing your writing about volcanoes on your blog. You have used some great adjectives and verbs to describe what is happening in the pictures. As Deb said, you have used some great alliteration. Are you enjoying learning about volcanoes?
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